Last confession

I tried this exercise and wanted to see if it came it good.

Igniting my yearning at a distance, I am immobilized.
A fear set arise, my heart clenched by paced breath
Taking the moments in one step at a time

You are overwhelming to my eyes


Hellos and goodbyes so damn bittersweet, can we just find a spot to be?
What exactly? The thought escapes me.
Meet me in a secluded place! We could be
Lovers with a proper shotgun in place

Embrace my taste


More worrisome expressions envelope my face
Worried you'll find out the truth of this
Evasive answers will be the next recurring case

We can't dare invoke this underlying passion
It was crafted to fit only one fragment
One soul
F**k it, we were meant to alter the rules
Feel the pull towards underlying fervor for you
Hopefully this will be my first and last confession I'll put you through.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Those late night confessions.
"F**k it, we were meant to alter the rules
Feel the pull towards underlying fervor for you
Hopefully this will be my first and last confession I'll put you through."
I like when the truth be told. Good to lay out the true need and want. I like the positive energy and the need in the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Timewilltell]

I never had a chance to thank you. Thank you so much man.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. i enjoyed the poem.

[Alyssia hall]

I really like this poem and can relate to how you feel! Especially like the opening paragraph :)