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A Poem by Timewilltell
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I don't know how to write poems. I don't really know how to write much of anything. Which is why I wish and hope you amazing people can give me pointers.

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Breath is supposed to be full of peace
and solace
One inhale by the count of two
One exhale by the count of four
maybe the structure is the cause of the momentary blurred vision

Feelings of a concaved chest, clenched fists
Opening my mouth as wide as a great void
Mild asphyxiation is still prominent, it
Frightens me
Like a man relentlessly occupied with his mortality
I too have become gassed
Will I ever see tomorrow past?




© 2014 Timewilltell


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Take a deep breath and get back to the first half - great poem expressing completely opposite feelings

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Timewilltell

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much

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Timewilltell
Timewilltell

bronx, NY



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Made this when I was in high school. Probably when I was a sophomore. 23 now, life has changed but all in all I'm almost the same. Just a bit of wear and tear but I promise! I'm worth the purchase...n.. more..

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