Drug

No Disclaimers

People tell me I can become whatever I want to be
So I did 
I became a drug
So sweet on the lips
So soft to the touch
Taking the strongest of breaths away
One kiss and you're addicted
You will go through withdrawals
Because there will be days that my lips will no longer touch yours
There will be days my touch will not meet yours
You will fall to your knees when I cry
So let me tell you 
I am nothing but trouble
Yet you think I'm so great
So riddle me this
Is the trouble worth the disaster that follows?

Author's Note

No Disclaimers

Reviews

[Jamestown]

Wow! Straight forward approach that I haven't seen much of now days
usually lie, cheat, steal, is the what people do now days to destroy someone's
heart, not you by the way you wrote this piece, I have complete respect for being
so honest:) if someone gets hurt with you being up front like this, you are not to
blame, they must take responsibility! Answer to riddle=NO! Really enjoyed this piece,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[The Silent Crescendo]

thank you, kindly!

[Perkele.7885]

You are a drug that is not worth my time or the standing in line
for the stomach upset you get after you wretch and then need to suck a fresh wedge of lime.

[Willard Wells]

As a romantic and addictive personality I would say yes to follow. Addiction is a hard thing to fight and my addiction to love drives me. I crave the addition to my love and you would be the kind of love I seek. Beautiful work and as you can tell it spoke to me.

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing poetry.
'I became a drug
So sweet on the lips
So soft to the touch
Taking the strongest of breaths away
One kiss and you're addicted"
Some drugs are sweet and needed. Some addiction is best days in a life. I liked the ending also. You left the reader with something to think about. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry. Please send read request. I like your work.
Coyote

[613]

I loved this so much. It was well written & the topic flowed. I look forward to reading more material from you in the future.

- Brittney

[Joshua Clement]

Awesome poem... loved it! Can't wait to read more!