silent nights

Silent Nights

 

 

Evergreen trees

Blowing breezes

Far beneath

Ancient Love

Worn and silent

Land locked still

The wind whispers

Not a sound is heard

Feet tread softly

On earth so hallow

Breathe so clear

The angels mistake

The dulcet tones

For crystal tears

Reviews

[..R.I.P..]

This piece is breath takingly beautiful. The last few lines are my favorite. "The angels mistake the dulcet tones for crystal tears" The imagery is amazing, you really do have a gift.

[Jade Mayhew]

The imagery in this is amazing. I loved the last few lines. "The angels mistake the dulcet tones for crystal tears." Absolutely beautiful. I loved it. Great job!

[Lorrie]

Awesome and well done. Smooth flow and great rhyme. Keep the good work.

[tomboy]

It's great. I really loved it. The poem breathed with life. I could imagine it easily even though you didn't go into deep description. I love it. It's simplicity was what really caught my eye. It was a joy reading it. Keep writing and make sure to create more great works such as this one.

[Infinite Midnight]

Superb simplicity! There is something to be said about a writer who can make you feel, and see more with less effort and words. This was a pleasure to read, wonderfully done.

[Cherry Berry]

You have a flare for imagery. This poem is simply breath taking. Well penned.
xox
Cherri

[~angelalala~]

i LOVE the imagery in this. this is an amazing poem. it's short but so beautifully and descriptively written. i love those last 3 lines: "The angels mistake The dulcet tones For crystal tears". gorgeous!!