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A Poem by charleybear

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The monster in my dreams

is the demon inside of me

the hate and the rage

is the complexity of the cage;

my mind

burning embers, surrounding,

engulfing, choking me

i'm sorrowfully aware of the pain,

that my soul see's

please somebody.............Save me!

© 2009 charleybear

Author's Note

please ignore grammitcal errors

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..R.I.P..

Most people try to ignore their demons. Embracing them helps get rid of them. I loved this poem, it was deep and sincere and it caught my eye instantly.

Posted 15 Years Ago

Gatlianne

A look inside the mind of a poet. How true what lies there can be. Great job.

Posted 15 Years Ago

Wicahpi

All I know is sometimes, unfortunately,
those demons do come to call. Chase them away!
Chocking is spelled choking if you'd like to edit.
If not, hey, that's perfectly peachy with me!
Peace n Light

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 15 Years Ago

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Added on February 16, 2009
Last Updated on February 20, 2009
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February 16, 2009

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charleybear

London, United Kingdom

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Hi My name is Charley. I am a 20 year old lesbian working at Nationwide building society. I've been writing since i was 11. I know I'm not brilliant but i write for my own enjoyment and sanity. Al.. more..