GOD CARED

a dream I had

I had a dream last night

vision of my own,

standing in the back

of my funeral where I roam,

there was 1 person there

a starnger seen by me,

not many showed up

for I have no friends you see,

he gave a flower

and shed a tear it was known to me,

that day at my funeral

god was there you see,

the 1 I locked out all my life

had never gave up on me,

he stood up and walked through me

never seen me standing there,

but I knew just for a second

God really did care.

Author's Note

let me know what you think

Reviews

[Dimples87]

Simply beautiful. It's relatable because a lot of people, have either a strained relationship or no relationship at all with God. I love this one and I hope you do find a part of yourself that will let God in your life even if it isn't the way people today want you to. Keep writing, your poems are always deep and have a greater meaning to them. Great job.