haiqua

haiqua

A Poem by charlie

summer ends


house paint


twists


into leaves

© 2015 charlie


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Having a dislike for preparation on sanding peeling paint before painting. All I could see are these images of twisted paint peeling from the heat and hence nothing came to mind that may lie underneath. A nice poem to ponder on!

Posted 9 Years Ago


and that multi-colored coat of pain is a beautiful shade of autumn.

nicely done...i think, as Perdition expressed, this piece might get up and walk after me...i won't forget it easily...

j.

Posted 9 Years Ago


charlie

9 Years Ago

I appreciate your time, j.
Fundamentally the piece exists on three balanced legs, gets up and walks after you....last time I checked that be the reason we write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


charlie

9 Years Ago

Thanks for sharing your time, P.

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Added on August 29, 2015
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charlie
charlie

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