tame me

Tame me

Tell me my personality is over the top

Constrict me

Forbid me

So now you have broken me

There’s nothing to expect from me

Place me on your mantel now

Pull me out to show me off

Always put me back right where you left me

Once you have tamed me

I am a quiet soul

Once you have constricted me

My boundaries are known

Forbidden me

Forbidden me to be me

I am not the joy I use to be

I am just there

Reviews

[Iota]

Wow, nice meaning to this write. Everything you wrote is so true in relationships couples forget themselves and get lost in the "us" loosing their true self.

[bluessadmood]

Oh this is so nice ..i was really engaged with your lines and words right away
i think its lovely for women to humble themselves for the one they love
she will be his beloved sweet slave and she will enslave him just the same
tell me i am on top..constrict me ,do what you like,dont expect nothing
put me on that self and take me ,show me off to other ,then you can put me back where you like
i am so quiet,my boundaries are known,and i am forbidden too be me
this is so wonderful ,i see there are good talents flooding in
lovely write..

[Coyote Poetry]

If someone want to tame you. Best to run away and be free. A excellent poem. Some wisdom hidden in your words.
Coyote