depressed love

If I could love another I would not

I take your rage as a sign of love

And with my rage you deal with until combustion clears

Two depressed souls should never love

But we do

When you cry it makes me cry

When you scream it makes me scream

When you fall to the ends of earth and you can’t take anymore pain I fall with you

We have no one but us and so only we can help

At least until the day we realize this love is better unfelt

Though we know that day will never come

But when I hold onto you I hold on as if it’s our last day together

I cry inside for there is no way you can escape me

Arguing with you is like arguing with myself because I always forgive and you as well

I slit my wrist hoping that you wipe the blood

You take the pills hoping I make you spit it up

When we are done we lay here a mess holding each other hoping the other does not hold our breath

But when they ask if I could would I love another I tell them that I would not because we share the same

Heart and I do not want my heart to stop.

 

 

 

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

this is nice..i am surprised and amazed at your deep and strange analyses of love..
oh yes at least one side of two in love should be strong ..so if both are broken and depressed
how you describe what might happen..you cry and so do i,you fall and i fall with you
this love should be unfelt but that day will never come
when i hold to you i feel like it our last touch
but there is no escaping you or me
and they ask me would i hold on or i will just love again
and i tell them i would not for we share the same
and i count on you..you with your weakness and mine..we will make it
so nice so beautiful..really loved this
lovely write..

[deeps]

This is quite the emotion filled write here. I like this it reads wonderful.
Very well written. Like your style!