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A Poem by charismalee

My heart is telling me to stop, think, and evaluate.

My mind is telling me that you don’t want to be here.

My soul has been left because you proved a long time ago that you don’t care.

So it crept out the door leaving its foot prints on the floor.

 

That is your proof that you have broken me.

---Broken

                ---me

                                ---down

I don’t have anything left but a hole in my chest from where my soul use to rest.

Now my heart is so lonely.

My mind is weary.

Goodbye pain.

 

© 2009 charismalee


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When the heart is broken. All doors to emotion are gone. A excellent poem. Description and story was very good.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like this quite the emotional write here.
I can feel this write here. Very well written and expressed!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 25, 2009
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charismalee
charismalee

burtonsville, MD



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I am 19 years old and I attend allegany college of maryland. I would like to transfer to st. johns university in new york city to major in creative writing. more..

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