Michael

Michael

A Poem by Chiquita

My heart’s  quickening
I love once again
Changes are manifesting
Hesitating, but a moment, I
Accept the new me that is being fashioned.
Echos of my death are fading.
Love, laughter, life are mine again.

Gratitude to the slayer of my death.  Thank you to the author of my rebirth.

© 2008 Chiquita


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Oh, what a jolt new love can be. A shock strong enough to bring your old heart back to life, back to the beauty of life. Rain..

Posted 16 Years Ago


Sneaking thru again, this caught my eye ... I'm still so happy for you!



Posted 16 Years Ago


"Gratitude to the slayer of my death. Thank you to the author of my rebirth."

This right here really catches me....Its so intense and intriguing.....Great Write....This was beautiful....


Kimberly Tickle~~~~Diamonds Of Life

Posted 17 Years Ago


A touching poem of love.

"Gratitude to the slayer of my death. Thank you to the author of my rebirth. " Such a beautiful line....when someone loves you, all is possible and rebirth seems plausible. I enjoyed this. Lydia


Posted 17 Years Ago


I love this poem. Very heart felt and very creative. Keep Writing!!!

Posted 17 Years Ago


Chiquita, wow, stunning work, very powerful lines. I really relate because I have went through so many changes for the better in the recent past. Wow, go, you!

Posted 17 Years Ago


oh this is deep and difficult. I can not such transformations.
beautiful flow into the darkness.

Posted 17 Years Ago


OH, such a happy place!! I love this little piece; so eloquently penned. I'm so happy for you, if this is true to life. If not, congratulations on fooling me!! aka nice work!!

Posted 17 Years Ago


Oh! the things that love can do, wonderful write

Posted 17 Years Ago


The ability to love and be loved is something shared by few.

The last line is stunning . . .




Posted 17 Years Ago


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