Migration

Migration

Brian Custer

 

Living her life free            (an albatross)

flying the breezes

beautiful girl;

a woman she would be

showering the other;

passion and romance

I had a woman once.

 

Thoughtful;        determined

being the best she can be

I loved this woman

she loved me

eyes wide open;              (wings afloat)

nothing left to chance

I had a woman once.

 

The times changed,

we made our ways

never forgetting

one another

feelings left open            (flying freely)

just like the breeze

that took you;   came back to me

 

in my heart                         (forever)

my soul and hers

haven't been apart

our minds wandering     (aloof)

our feelings shaded in dark

this fleeting moment

reigniting our spark

 

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

Living her life free (an albatross)
flying the breezes
beautiful girl;
a woman she would be
showering the other;
passion and romance
I had a woman once.

This is a very original poem. It is the way you said it. Is there a name for this kind of poetry with the summary words to the side? Nicely done. Thanks for entering the Missing Him, Missing Her contest.

[Brian Custer]

I am interested in all viewpoints! Please feel free to read my work! Much Love!
Brian ;)

[Butterflymom]

Very nicely done! What a beautiful, creative, and original piece. I love the title! Keep up the writing! I will look forward to reading more of your work.