How Lucky??

 Lucky are those who love
whose lover's lips linger
with the sweet intoxicating addictive nectar
we call love

Lucky are those who know
who know and bear the mark
of love....
for love leaves a mark on the heart
which is reflected in the eye
which is red in the face
which is then envied by all who 

do not know....

Lucky are those of us that don't give up
whose heart has been shattered
who then picked up every piece with care
and gently pieced it back together

Lucky are we to have hope....


For a brighter day....

Reviews

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My introduction to your writing.

Written seven years ago i see, so you are a wisened poet and the experience you have is fully on display in this poem. Written in a melancholic tone while reaching for the light, this poem is very well written and straight from the heart. Love the use of alliteration in the second line, very nice work.

Keep on writing and searching for the light.

[Shadow Writer]

This was a beautiful write full of love and bright prospect for the future. Well done. PS