Take it

It can not be real,
but it will not be fake...
spun with lies,
and riddled with mistakes.
How could this happen?
How could it be?
How could you loose
what meant everything to me?

The world has stopped spinning,
my heart sits still,
my body is crumbling,
and it yearns for you still.
I betray myself...
by loving you!
You say you are lost here,
but I am here to!

I feel so broken...
you have taken so much,
left me here with nothing...
and it is still not enough?
How many times
must I tear myself apart,
to show to you
my breaking and bleeding heart?

Is it not enough
that I will bleed for you?
Is it not enough
that I am here to?
Is it not enough
that I wear all of my scars?
Is it not enough
to have all of my heart?

Reviews

[Rachel P]

I love the emotion and I love the piece, it is a wonderful read and really did pull emotion.

[Zakari Schmidt]

Excellent rhyme scheme from beginning to end, very cool!

[Jessica Lynn Polley]

Thank you Zach can I call you Zach?

[Zakari Schmidt]

Lol you're very welcome and you certainly may

[yuki]

I really feel the love that was felt. feeling that when you love someone who you loved for a really long time then to get your heart crush and feels numb. very nicely done :)

[Jessica Lynn Polley]

Thank you so much Yuki :)

[yuki]

your welcome and my pleasure :)

[Jamie R. Robillard Sr.]

Great write, I enjoyed this very much.

[Jessica Lynn Polley]

Thank you Uncle. Your not just being nice right remember I want your honesty? :)

[Jamie R. Robillard Sr.]

I am not just being nice. I may write more of a review later though. I am just tired at this point.