Take it

It can not be real,
but it will not be fake...
spun with lies,
and riddled with mistakes.
How could this happen?
How could it be?
How could you loose
what meant everything to me?

The world has stopped spinning,
my heart sits still,
my body is crumbling,
and it yearns for you still.
I betray myself...
by loving you!
You say you are lost here,
but I am here to!

I feel so broken...
you have taken so much,
left me here with nothing...
and it is still not enough?
How many times
must I tear myself apart,
to show to you
my breaking and bleeding heart?

Is it not enough
that I will bleed for you?
Is it not enough
that I am here to?
Is it not enough
that I wear all of my scars?
Is it not enough
to have all of my heart?

Reviews

[Sam]

Soul, emotion, passion, whatever you call it, you've put it in here, and it reads so well.

[Bree135]

Nicely written. I can tell how passionate you are with this. Keep up the great writing.

[KeeD]

Sometimes you feel like you give n you give and just expect happiness or co-existence in return. But when that too fades away and all that's left is a cold heart and a room full of dismay.. walk away.. walk away. For the heart is Christmas, the heart is joy.. but even Christmas can feel all kids of crap for an unloved homeless girl or boy.

[Yours Truly]

This poem describes how I felt perfectly a while back. It flows so effortlessly and has so much emotion talking about how one can make you feel. Enjoyed reading very much :)

[Malister Mikey]

Such strong emotions on this piece I absolutely loved it good work Jessica.

[Simon Welsh]

People suck. Nicely written.

[Swaroop Manikandan]

it evokes a deep pain within me....

[Lyn Anderson]

The pain and torment is palpable in this piece. A wonderful portrait of love and betrayal, heartbreak and denial.

[Frontier]

Wow, this really resounded with me. I can relate totally, as I pretty much feel this way about someone in my life. It's sad to feel like our whole world isn't the same for another person. I guess we have to break free somehow and learn from it. Those first two lines, describe my feeling exactly.
Superb job.