My heartbreak

My heart break is lying here in a sea of my own tears drowning, gasping for air feeling like he's the only one who can save me.
And as I sink I look back wondering what I did wrong only to realize he's the one who became so cold and still refuses to change trapping me in an endless winter.
And trying to walk to warmer bays doesn't help because I have weathered so many of his storms my cells are frozen fragile flakes that melt in the presence of anybody else's warmth.
And the more I reach for him the less I know what I'm reaching for because everything I thought he was he isn't and what I need him to be he'll never become.
So I'm forced to face oblivion because I fell for something that was never there and nothing can replace the nonexistent being that fell for.

Reviews

[oneartyom]

I like the imagery of this! Maybe try to make the poem more... coherent? I like the emotion of it, but it feels a bit like some of it doesn't flow or otherwise make sense.... You know?