Mary's Little Lamb—An Original Scary Story

Part Two of my October Horrors Series

Mary had a little lamb

Who's fleece was stained blood red

For it was on Mary's classmates

This little lamb was fed

First it was Billy

Who called Mary a few names

Mary told the lamb his address

And they never found his remains

Then it was Mary Sue

Who wanted Mary's date

It didn't take long for the lamb

Til Mary Sue was ate*

Lastly it was Mary's parents

Who didn't buy her things

Late one night in bed

The neighbors hear their screams

So if one night you see a lamb

With Mary by its side

Do not anger them please

It could cost you your life

*-Should be eaten, but it had to rhyme

Author's Note

MUWAHAAA!!!

Reviews

[anxia]

Your sinister laugh added to the eerie poem, spine chilling!!!

[Steven Cash]

Aha a thanks

[Mia]

One quick question...where do I get such a lamb?!
It could come in handy...I have a couple of people I wouldn't mind setting a carnivorous lamb on...LOL...just kidding...kind of.
This is another great one; I had a bit of a giggle. No nightmares from this one, only dreams of my own little lamb...haha.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

.-. thank you for ruining my childhood daddy....loved this :D

[Steven Cash]

ahaaa thanks bunches, baby girl

[Angie Diane♥♥]

You're welcome daddy

[Sirius King]

this was funny lol

good write!

[Steven Cash]

ahaa thanks bro

[David the writer]

Wow Marry must be a huge b***h! lol Good work, dude

[Steven Cash]

Thanks bunches man

[David the writer]

ya no prob

[Westminster Abbey]

MUWAHAAA!!! hahahha love it! Creepy, yet somehow funny (I know, I'm so weird) (8>/--

[Steven Cash]

lol not werid, Abby, just... interesting lol

[Taylor H.]

loooved this lol

[Steven Cash]

Thanks bunches Taylor

[Taylor H.]

welcome bunches

[Pratik]

Good one.... Well you wrote this actually as a poem.. I have a few rhyming issues( certain rhymes like 'names' and 'remains' sound a bit forced to me).... Otherwise I found this a funny, enjoyable read... Unambiguous and readable..

[Steven Cash]

Yea, I know :/ it bugged me too, but it had to be done

[Pratik]

Never mind.... You can edit it after you have thought something better to change the rhyming pattern :)

[Steven Cash]

I will go back over it :) it's no problem, I enjoy your opinions

[That_Guy]

Guess I won't be counting sheep to fall asleep tonight

[Steven Cash]

BWUAAAHAAAAA lol tooo funny!

[camryn hernanez]

awesome as always

[Steven Cash]

Thanks Camryn!

[camryn hernanez]

your welcome