Mary's Little Lamb—An Original Scary Story

Part Two of my October Horrors Series

Mary had a little lamb

Who's fleece was stained blood red

For it was on Mary's classmates

This little lamb was fed

First it was Billy

Who called Mary a few names

Mary told the lamb his address

And they never found his remains

Then it was Mary Sue

Who wanted Mary's date

It didn't take long for the lamb

Til Mary Sue was ate*

Lastly it was Mary's parents

Who didn't buy her things

Late one night in bed

The neighbors hear their screams

So if one night you see a lamb

With Mary by its side

Do not anger them please

It could cost you your life

*-Should be eaten, but it had to rhyme

Author's Note

MUWAHAAA!!!

Reviews

[deepblue04]

nice way to end bullying

[Steven Cash]

ahaa lol thanks

[Natasha]

ahha very clever

[Steven Cash]

Yea, I tried my best :)

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I KNEW IT!!!!!!! Mary and that lamb were too innocent, something was up. Cool poem :3

[Steven Cash]

ahaa thanks Jamillet!

[violetta york / nicki e..]

I love the writing, theme, and rhyme! Very chilling!

[Steven Cash]

Thanks Nicole

[sensualrogue]

amazing, I love the rhyming scheme and the assonance. Very Original and easy on the mouth. Nice flow. Keep it up!! x

[Steven Cash]

Easy on the mouth? That's what she said last time we went out

XD thanks bunches

[Fréyjä Helv..]

The meter didn't sound right. It didn't quite got what it was supposed to do, which I assume is to make the old nursery rhyme into something "unpleasant". The flow too didn't seem right at all... But that's just me...

[Steven Cash]

I understand Lillith

I struggled writing this, flowise. Definitely not my best. More, a work of necessity

[CLUTZ]

That's not creepy at all.....I'm severely freaked out right now, so yeah.

[Steven Cash]

okaaaaaaaay

[CLUTZ]

I'm sorry if that came off rude, it was good, I'm just easily afraid.

[Steven Cash]

kk

[Raminta]

Perfect read for Halloween

[Steven Cash]

yea

[Raminta]

How did you come up with the idea if I may ask? Sorry I'm just curious

[RachelReaper]

haha, sounds like my pet chinchilla

[Steven Cash]

Lol Rachel thanks