state of affairs

this has been brewing inside me

women are admirable
for protecting their man
but honestly they go over board
and play to the preys plan

women go off a wall
if their husbands eyes stray
but this is pure stupidity
you wont keep him that way

see women fear they will loose their spouse
to a cougar or a milf
thats not the case though
never was and never will

affairs do not happen
with the hottest woman around
they come from conivence
where secrets abound

its why guys cheat sometimes
with girls who dont lookgood
they go with the easiest
not the hotties they should

so if you want your man faithful
dont get suspicious the waitress he eyes
get suspicious of the coworker
he is with after 5

Author's Note

please ignore the lack of capitalization and punctuation

this stupid phone will not let me easily do such

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

LOL oh yeah i see this all the time

[Steven Cash]

Yep yep :)

[Tate Morgan]

perusing a few of your poems hope you don't mind.Funny about women so often their culture is so different from the way men think.men will for instance fight and it is over.Just a little test to see if one will fight back and where he belongs in the pack But women will get all their friends gathered around to out someone then they claim I never laid a finger on her lol.

[Steven Cash]

lol yea ahaa :)

and i don't mind. hope you enjoy what you see

[Tate Morgan]

yeah i see truths in it

[Ees]

This is good advice. You are right, men cheat with the easy/convenient ones, but be careful, in the beginning you almost sound like you are blaming the women for those sorts of actions, because they go crazy. Not all woman go crazy. Not all men cheat. There are a million reasons... a million questions and a million answers.

"thats not the case though
never was and never will"-
something isn't right in those lines, some sort of typo.


other than that this was a good poem with a lovely flow.

[Steven Cash]

Thanks

[That_Girl]

That's not protection, that's possession. Possession that could kill a relationship. Women that are always wary of their spouse's eyes or intentions are insecure and untrusting. Honestly, don't get married to someone you don't trust... I'm not saying that will protect you from ever getting cheated on, but if the relationship starts out healthy, there's a better chance of it remaining healthy. Just my thoughts.

Nice poem!

[Steven Cash]

Sounds like the truth to me

Thanks foe the review

[That_Girl]

Anytime! :)

[afra]

well all women are not like that ...and even if some are like that they are just afraid to loose their love ....great write

[Steven Cash]

thanks for the review
i wrote this from family experience