Here Tonight

Amanda J. S. just inspires me sooo much. i am glad to call her a friend. So... well... I gotta try to keep pace at least.

(no shame. Amanda J. S. is my hero, and my main inspiration in poetry. So, I am borrowing some technique and all. Hope she doesn't mind.)

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We're two lovers in the night

Waiting on the sun to rise

We are the essence of perfection

Everything other couples have tried to be

And failed

We are

Here tonight

We are perfect

Here together

Consumed in our love

Ignited in passion

Ablaze forever

Others watch, hoping

Wishing

They could have it so good

But we have it so good

Because we have each other

Because we are perfect

Together

Here tonight

Author's Note

YEA I DID IT!

Reviews

[Mia]

Very sweet and full of love. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this.

[Steven Cash]

Thanks Mia!

[That_Girl]

The structure is really nice. Flows well... I like it! :)

[Steven Cash]

Thanks!

[Kelsey]

This is so simple, yet so beautiful. Wonderful job.

[Steven Cash]

Thanks Kelsey

[Valentine]

A very nice write..I like the underneath passion and feeeling you wrote of..Valentine

[Steven Cash]

Thanks Val

[Lily Mae]

Very nice.. I like it..xo

[Steven Cash]

Thanks Lily

[Poison Ivy]

Others watch, hoping

Wishing

They could have it so good


that right there shows a great deal about your heart and yours words. well done my friend on this poem.

[Steven Cash]

Thanks Ivy

i need to pow-wow with you soon about Christening rituals from a Wiccian standpoint

[RachelReaper]

sweet, the message seems to echo even after you finish reading it. And if you based this off someone else, I can clearly see that person along with yourself has a very distinct way of writing. :) Nice

[Steven Cash]

Thanks

[silver threaded queen]

romantic, slow hazy layout... love it!!

[Steven Cash]

Thanks

[Sirius King]

very nice!

[Steven Cash]

Thanks man

[KAOlmsted]

Yes you did!! Really nice poem, SC...very idyllic.

[Steven Cash]

Thanks teacher, means a lot coming from you

I hope I can do something better soon