Student

Poem Six

Science
Teacher
Attendance
Trina
Student
Flirty
Smile
Awkward
After-school
Alone
Failing
Bribe?
NO!
Well...
Tomorrow
After-school
Now
Spanking
Naughty
Screaming
Kneeling
Janitor
Caught
RAPE!!!
Police
Guilty
Life
Transfered
Math
Teacher
Attendance
Trina
Student
Flirty...

Reviews

[J. Viands]

Creative

[Steven Cash]

Thanks

[Mia]

Very clever way of telling a story...very very clever. The only thing worse than rape, is pretending to be raped just because you're a slapper. SHAMEFUL!

[Steven Cash]

Thanks Mias

[Steven Cash]

*Mia

[The Refined Poet]

liked the way you told this story, it definitely made the desired impact.

[Steven Cash]

Thanks

[Tatiana]

really liked this request i don't respond to most , loved the flow. told a great story great job :)

[Steven Cash]

Thanks

[Felicity's Eve]

I'm really liking the flow of these poems. Thanks for requesting it and great job! :)

[Steven Cash]

Thanks Nora

[David the writer]

Well, it was... good and well.. kinda disturbing as well. It was well written just rape disturbs me

[Steven Cash]

Disturbs me too

I'm like, there are thousands of girls willing to get laid at the drop of a hat
why force a girl to?

and actually, it wasn't rape. She just said that to get out of trouble

[David the writer]

I see
well she must be a b***h!
and I get your point. Why force when there are girls out there wanting it badlly

[Steven Cash]

yep yep yep

[CYNICALIS]

Wow...I really liked this. For some reason I thought it was going in a different direction until I realized that it was a cycle. Really powerful actually. LOVED the flow.

[Steven Cash]

thanks Asha

[Steven Cash]

BTW that is such a beautiful name

[CYNICALIS]

Why thank you! It's my real name and I've always loved it. Means "Hope" in Hindi.

[Steven Cash]

Wonderful!

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

And it goes on...liked the flow.

[Steven Cash]

thanks Doc

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XD agreeing with RachelReaper happens about once a week here. :P

[Steven Cash]

Jesus, you get a teacher arrested every week?

lol jk but thanks for reading

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lol i'm joking but no some have been arrested XD and welcome!