First

Poem Four

Guy

 

Nice

 

Question

 

Maybe

 

Maybe

 

Okay

 

Night

 

Virgin

 

Trust

 

Nervous

 

Sweating

 

Confusion

 

Tricked

 

Murdered

 

Serial

 

Escaped

Author's Note

yea, I wrote that. had to

Reviews

[David Scott]

OK! Third poem of yours in this style I have read. This one is good. Not so obvious and made me think. I like this and I can get the value of the style better here.
Good write! Sorry if I offended with the reviews that were less posative, but I will just be honest. No need to feed ego...
I like this!

[Steven Cash]

It's ok thanks for reading

[David Scott]

Really is better than OK. You challenged the word! This was actually very good.

[Steven Cash]

Thanks!

[Tomi]

Interesting! Very creative...

[Steven Cash]

Thanks Tomi

[Secret Lullaby]

Oh I liked this one(: I understood it the moment I read it(: Great job!

[Steven Cash]

Thanks

[Steven Cash]

not many did

[Ella]

Eh. Not my favourite again. Needs a few more words I think to make the story more complete.

[Steven Cash]

Well thanks for reading

[Barbara Walker]

I'm a little confused on this one. Who was murdered and who escaped?

[Steven Cash]

Virgin was murdered, and the serial virgin killer escaped

[That_Girl]

It's disturbing but that does not reflect on who you are. I like it. :)

[Steven Cash]

Thanks

[C.C. Marx]

Wow. That is legit I can think to say rite now.

[Steven Cash]

Thanks!

[C.C. Marx]

It is that good I'm speechless I'm never speechless. People cant get me to shutup!

[RachelReaper]

twist ending!!!! *shocked expression*

[Steven Cash]

yea, horror side of me

[RachelReaper]

*smirks* I think everyone has a horror side, but it kind of takes guts to show it.

[Isobella Rose]

Oh.. Wow. Wasn't expecting that AT ALL. Great, once again :)

[Steven Cash]

Yea thanks so much!!!

[Isobella Rose]

No problem :):):):):)1

[Isobella Rose]

Whoops I typed the 1 by accident...

[Steven Cash]

np