Love

Poem Three

Shy

 

Sighted

 

Stammering

 

Hello

 

Happy

 

Blushing

 

Cute

 

Boy

 

Friend

 

Talk

 

Study

 

Smile

 

Confident

 

Precious

 

BFF

 

Thanks

 

Author's Note

this one is a lil.... eh, short

Reviews

[YouoweYoupay]

I see how your style goes. Okay, I consider this a very healthy excercise. Camille Corbett calls it 'Word Vomit'. This also helps with quick brainstorming, because before you start an actual writing of prose/poetry, you need to scribble down the relevant, suitable, and grammatically fitting words. Just like a seashell or jasmine necklace, you can't create either before collecting shells or flowers. Very good. Keep it up.

[Steven Cash]

Thanks so much

[Sunny Skye]

Good poem, i like it. I like the ending and how you started it, a lot of relationships start like this. People are shy but once they talk they become close friends. Good job!

-SkyeBlanco

[Steven Cash]

Thanks so much Skye

[Sunny Skye]

It was my pleasure, good job

[Kathrine]

its diferent from poety i normaly read, but maybe that makes it good. its nice to read words what would describe my partner :) anyway good pice.

[Steven Cash]

that's great

thanks!