Alone

Poem Two

Bullied

 

Depressed

 

Ugly

 

Cutting

 

Angry

 

Sad

 

Suicidal

 

Abandoned

 

Insulted

 

Opressed

 

Desperate

 

Praying

 

Better

 

Talking

 

Better

 

Helped

 

Better

 

Healed

 

 

Reviews

[That1Nerd23]

Ahh, very nice!

[Steven Cash]

Thanks girl!

[That1Nerd23]

You're welcome. (:

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Sad but true. Still loving your one word poems! 100/100 :)

[Steven Cash]

Thanks

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U're welcome! :)

[SmileBig :)]

Story of my life. Nice job!

[Steven Cash]

Thanks Missy

[A. V. Madison]

The one thing that I enjoy about your one-liner poems, is that it tells a story. In single words. And that, my friend, is very hard to do. It can only be mastered by someone with a lot of skill. And you have a lot of skill.

This is one of your best, Steven. Bravo. 100/100

[Steven Cash]

Thanks so much Maddie

Means a lot coming from you

[Ella]

Awh. A cute story. Glad in this one she gets better XD Love this still. Love this style

[Steven Cash]

Thanks glad ya liked it

[Barbara Walker]

Full range of the story. Great write!

[Steven Cash]

Thanks!

[That_Girl]

From bullied to desperate to healed. Nice!

[Steven Cash]

Thanks!!

[RachelReaper]

aw, this is sweet :)

[Steven Cash]

Yep thanks

[Isobella Rose]

I agree with Amanda also. I really like how you repeat some lines :)

[Steven Cash]

thanks