Hmmm, not sure how I feel about that many believes. I am not sure that you make me care what you believe. I don't mean that in a mean way, I mean that in a strictly looking at the page kind of way. When you write a poem I think that it is smart to think about what would make a reader want to read it.
I do absolutely love your belief that what doesn't kill you makes you "stranger". You are prob right on that one! I don't know about the rest of them. but, hey we are all different and that is a good thing!
I believe that I will someday have red-headed babies.
I believe in power
I believe in e.. read moreI believe that I will someday have red-headed babies.
I believe in power
I believe in energy.
I don't believe that we are alone in the universe either
and I do agree that the bang that supposedly started this whole thing must have come from somewhere.
I believe that boys are cutest when they are skinny and sleepy.
I believe in letting boys be in charge, because it feels good to have a protective arm.
I believe that Obama is the worst president we've had since FDR.
That's right, I refuse to believe that FDR was a good president.
I believe that Mitt Romney is a fraud too.
I believe in fairies and magic, I just can't help it
I believe in the clock at my elk house
I believe in a whole hell of a lot....
see did you really care?
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Oh, I believe that moe. is the greatest band.
You got a music comment, I had to get mine in t.. read moreOh, I believe that moe. is the greatest band.
You got a music comment, I had to get mine in too.
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Redhead babies will be cute
lol bout skinny boys
Obama worse than Bush? no way on planet.. read moreRedhead babies will be cute
lol bout skinny boys
Obama worse than Bush? no way on planet earth. Bush putting the debt to 12 tril is worse than the 3 tril Obama added.
actually I do care
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aww man, it's from a movie, I thought you thought of that yourself!?
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You never saw The Dark Knight? google that line
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:)
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Haha, who knew!
I suppose I have just been exposed as a self-centered selfish b***h, eh? ahah.. read moreHaha, who knew!
I suppose I have just been exposed as a self-centered selfish b***h, eh? ahah.
Okay, Bush wasn't the greatest, but most of what Obama is seems to be smoke in mirrors and a lot of media coverage. I do think that his wife is the best first lady in all of history. she's awesome, but I just can't stand for a government that tries to tell us how to live soooo much.
I'm all about voting outside the current party lines.
Or revolt.
Actually I am about revolt, and restoring the country to where it was in the beginning. Isolationist. And no damn government not trusting it's own people to make their own decisions. As in, as long as you are not hurting anybody or infringing on anybody else's freedom it should be legal. Like wearing a seatbelt. (I always do) but if you are smart enough to drive a car and vote for elected officials you are smart enough to weigh the risks and rewards and decide for yourself if the rewards are worth the risks.
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bout the Gov't, it's corupt yea, but we need it.
What if there was no Gov't and there w.. read morebout the Gov't, it's corupt yea, but we need it.
What if there was no Gov't and there was an attack on America? You wouldn't even be able to get an Army together, too many folk wanting different things
read my poem Freedom about the other things
and Obama isn't perfect. I just said greatest since JFK. He is better than Nixon, Ford, Bush and Raegan. Clinton... maybe not
Here is what i say about Obama and the good he has done.
taken unemployment from 10% to 8%
Took GM from Bankruptcy to #1 again
Ended two wars (one of which my Aunt fought in)
Killed Bin Laden
AND ALL WITH GOP HATING HIM
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I saw The Dark Knight in the theater the morning after a party and about 20 minutes sleep- so, eh, i.. read moreI saw The Dark Knight in the theater the morning after a party and about 20 minutes sleep- so, eh, it's a bit of a blur.
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You should see it again
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I didn't say we didn't need government. We just need a different one.
And I forgot to say, read moreI didn't say we didn't need government. We just need a different one.
And I forgot to say,
I believe in the survival of the fittest.
I think if there were an attack on the america we wouldn't be any worse off and I think that bands of individuals would try to seek retribution.
It's be easy to get an army together, it'd be harder to pull strong and logical leaders from it. I am surprised at your pessimism. It happened before. There was that whole Revolutionary War. It is how we go started.
I think Raegan did some decent things!
My mom's boyfriend works for GM and says that it is all a load of crock and the government won't let them go and that they actually forced them into bankruptcy.- That is what I know from his first hand experience within that company.
I cannot comment on the others, because I don't know enough, though my dad was actually a Navy Seal during the Vietnam War and worked for the government doing secret things for many years and he is constantly saying that the credit of Bin Laden's death going to Obama is bullshit.
It doesn't matter that the GOP hates him. He hates the GOP. It'd be exactly the same if it was the other way around.
and now try being a small business owner- then you know Obama doesn't do you any favors. More regulations... more taxes... oh and under his health care concept, we'd have to pay for employee's healthcare. Ooops, that means we are out of business and out of jobs. Where the f**k would that money come from? The government is always acting like small businesses are out to cheat them. They don't have a clue how hard it is to keep going and have employees. Then the large corporations get tax breaks?! and on a side note that just creates a sucky generic america!
I think Reag
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Rev War started with Gov't. They tried with a band of 'survival of the fittest' rebels. Didn't work... read moreRev War started with Gov't. They tried with a band of 'survival of the fittest' rebels. Didn't work.
I am a small business owner too. I am shocked that you could possibly have anything good to say abou.. read moreI am a small business owner too. I am shocked that you could possibly have anything good to say about Obama being a business owner. I have never ever heard another business owner who was in favor of him and I know many people who own different kinds of businesses.
If you have four relatives who either work or worked for GM, ask them about it. GM, from my understanding really was displeased with the government involvement and they could have easily avoided bankruptcy, but were pushed into it.
And the Revolutionary War started with men who overthrew government and planned a new one, which is what I was suggesting.
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Yea, small business owner. Obama cut taxes for us small businesses, and as far as the health care th.. read moreYea, small business owner. Obama cut taxes for us small businesses, and as far as the health care thing, that's normal. It would have been WORSE with GOP plans, cause all employees would have higher costs for healthcare, esp highering seniors
i believe ghost exist
i believe in love at first sight
i believe there are angels and devils
i believe there is something up there but we shouldnt have to worship it
i believe that everything happens for a reason
i believe that adelitas way is the best band
i believe in second chances
i believe in gay rights
very well done
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very nice
oh, sorry, I didn't mean to make it seem like I'm a homophobe
"I believe Justin Beiber has the same amount of musical talent my shoe does"
Hands down the best line of the whole poem, it made me giggle. I believe this poem is quite interesting in the fact that it's different, and it's full of *personal* beliefs. I love the "What do you believe?" at the end. This made me think about the fact that we're all so different, whether it be in beliefs, religion, or whatever it may be; we're all our own person. Lovely job, I enjoyed this.
It was fun to read what your beliefs are. Just a few of mine-I believe in coffee, manners, sleeping in, family, I believe with privileges comes responsibility, I believe in birth control.
heeyyyyyyyy, this reminds me of that song by Savage Garden, I think it might actually be title "I believe" you should go check it out, I think its from either the 90's pr the year 2000 or somewhere around there. I like your poem, though, I made an instant connection to it.
"I believe aliens do exist, cause in the billions of miles we cannot be all there is"
"I believe music is medicine, and I overdose daily"
"I believe ghosts exist"
"I believe in second chances"
^
I have to agree with all of these :D
I actually really like the repetition in this piece, it was a very interesting read.
well done!
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That's my poem. Goodbye everyone.
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