IT—An Original Scary Story

something short

Don’t take your eyes off the screen.

If you were to turn around, you would see it.

What’s ‘it’ you ask? That thing you just saw move in your peripheral vision. 

You can feel its presence.

The feeling you feel in your stomach, twisting it in knots.

And the goosebumps that prick your arms

It is there, but don't look. 

If you don’t turn, it will assume it’s business. It only appeared for a few seconds before disappearing again.

But if you turn to make eye contact with it…

God have mercy on your soul.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[deepblue04]

cool

[Steven Cash]

Thanks

[Sunny Skye]

Good stuff. Nicely done.

-SkyeBlanco

[Steven Cash]

Thanks

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

.____. this just made me want to pee myself. Great write.

[Steven Cash]

THat's a good thing :) from an author standpoint

thanks bunches Baby girl

[Angie Diane♥♥]

THANKS DADDY I CAN'T GO TO BED NOW!

[Steven Cash]

ahaaa :))) lol and on your birthday too

[Angie Diane♥♥]

THANKS SO MUCH DADDY!!

[Sirius King]

i shouldn't have read this
with all of the lights off
home alone...something just moved lol

[Steven Cash]

MWUAHAAAA!!! lol thanks man for reading

[Sirius King]

lol np haha

[camryn hernanez]

i was paranoid.....

[Steven Cash]

Aha a thanks

[Kes]

Wooohooo! I love this. I'm now officially freaked out. :)
K

[Steven Cash]

lol ahaaa Thanks!

[Isobella Rose]

Oh my gosh lol now I will be paranoid XD anyway great job :)

[Steven Cash]

lol thanks!

[Isobella Rose]

Yup :)

[Soul Fire]

erie..

[Steven Cash]

Thanks Raya

[Geraldine]

Ayayay! I'm glad I didn't read this at night. haha :D

[Steven Cash]

lol thank you much

[J. Viands]

Horror is a great median to captivate an audience with. You pulled it off here provoking familiar emotion and feelings, a question is always important but you began with a consequence which is always great for horror. As always job well done good sir job well done

[Steven Cash]

Thanks so much man