Midnight

Hold her while she is here
No matter how long
Cause the clock will soon strike midnight and she will be gone

Don't take her for granted
Look into her eyes
Be with her when she is happy
And hold her when she cries

Don't waste time looking
Searching for someone else
Love her for who she is
Make your words heartfelt

She's the one you need
It's simple, I will explain
Tell her you love her
Don't let her slip away

They said it and its true
Don't let fear blind your sight
Sometimes the hardest thing
And the right thing are alike

So speak up and say it
Take her for your own
Hold her forever
And never let her go

Don't think your job is over
When you are one
Cause love is a process
Never stop til life is done

So tell her how you feel
You may not have long
Cause the clock will soon strike midnight
And she will be gone

Reviews

[Tomi]

Sometimes the hardest thing
And the right thing are alike
I love this poem, well done! beautiful piece!

[Steven Cash]

Yes thanks Tomi. That line was inspired by All At Oncr by The Fray

[Geraldine]

S-W-E-E-T and simply B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L. ^^ The second stanza is superb! >.< "Cause love is a process, Never stop til life is done" What a line! :D And there's one thing I notice, from stanza one to the last, I love. :)) haha Very well-written and expressed.

[Steven Cash]

Thanks Geraldine

[BIIKAY]

i like this! to the point. i like how you said love is a process and never stop until life is done..i had a thought...even when life is over is the love done? maybe we will love eternity? just a thought :P great job.

[Steven Cash]

Love could be eternal. Never thought of that

[Violet Dreams...]

This is beautiful

[Steven Cash]

Thank you

[camryn hernanez]

I love this one. It is really good.

[Steven Cash]

Thanks Camryn

[Soul Fire]

Beautiful poem :)
I really liked this

[Steven Cash]

Thank you!

[Soul Fire]

you're welcome

[Love Demon]

I like this, it has a lot of feeling and it has a great rhythm. 100

[Steven Cash]

thank you much