Midnight

Hold her while she is here
No matter how long
Cause the clock will soon strike midnight and she will be gone

Don't take her for granted
Look into her eyes
Be with her when she is happy
And hold her when she cries

Don't waste time looking
Searching for someone else
Love her for who she is
Make your words heartfelt

She's the one you need
It's simple, I will explain
Tell her you love her
Don't let her slip away

They said it and its true
Don't let fear blind your sight
Sometimes the hardest thing
And the right thing are alike

So speak up and say it
Take her for your own
Hold her forever
And never let her go

Don't think your job is over
When you are one
Cause love is a process
Never stop til life is done

So tell her how you feel
You may not have long
Cause the clock will soon strike midnight
And she will be gone

Reviews

[Kuhr Gred]

i like this. . it's similar to the anime story "Shakugan no Shana" the difference is when the clock strike at midnight .. the boy will be gone.. anyway, keep it up... :) thanks for sharing
- Kuhr Gred

[Steven Cash]

thank you, Kuhr

[Isobella Rose]

This is amazing! Well done! I wish I could write poems like that!

[Steven Cash]

lol this is only my 4th poem. I just have been doing it for about a week.

[That1Nerd23]

This is lovely! Well done my friend!

[Steven Cash]

Thanks, friend

[That1Nerd23]

You're welcome, friend.

[Matt Evans]

I like this a lot! I'm not good with poems, and i don't know what to look for in them exactly, but i liked the flow of it and the meaning behind it. only thing is to change site to sight. But we all have those little brain farts now and then haha.

[Steven Cash]

lol brain fart

ok yeah I'm changing that

glad you liked it

[Matt Evans]

No problem man!

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

this is so very sweet and sooo very true! it really connects with the reader it just transfers over soo well! Great job :-) keep it up and by the way absolutely awesome rythme as well :-)

[Steven Cash]

Thanks Hannah

[Zachary_James]

Wow this is great, i love yout writing style thanks for sharing.

[Steven Cash]

Thanks Zach. Have I read any of your stuff?

[Zachary_James]

Not yet i don't think.

[Steven Cash]

i will tho i promise

[Amanda J. S.]

Sweet! love the first stanza! :-)

[Steven Cash]

Thanks Amanda

[Westminster Abbey]

The first and last stanza reminds me of the song "Cinderella" by Steven Curtis Chapman I think. Nice job. There were a few misspellings, though.

[Steven Cash]

Yes tthat was part of my inspiration

[Rhianne Ney]

Oh... Cinderella, huh? I hate some usual fairytales with useless princes who needs divine intervention to find their princess... Good write Keep writing

[Steven Cash]

Lol glad u liked it

[Rhianne Ney]

of course I do

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Totaly Cinderella! Loved it! 100/100

[Steven Cash]

Yes Kat I thought of Cinderella by Steven Curtis Chapman

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That story always makes good poems :)