Midnight

Hold her while she is here
No matter how long
Cause the clock will soon strike midnight and she will be gone

Don't take her for granted
Look into her eyes
Be with her when she is happy
And hold her when she cries

Don't waste time looking
Searching for someone else
Love her for who she is
Make your words heartfelt

She's the one you need
It's simple, I will explain
Tell her you love her
Don't let her slip away

They said it and its true
Don't let fear blind your sight
Sometimes the hardest thing
And the right thing are alike

So speak up and say it
Take her for your own
Hold her forever
And never let her go

Don't think your job is over
When you are one
Cause love is a process
Never stop til life is done

So tell her how you feel
You may not have long
Cause the clock will soon strike midnight
And she will be gone

Reviews

[under-the-water]

this is perfect. in the society we are in today - i feel that boys have lost respect for girls - treating them like toys without meaning . but this poem has brought back that meaning to love
i especially like the lines
Don't take her for granted
Look into her eyes
Be with her when she is happy
And hold her when she cries
beautifully written and you seem to kno what ur writing about - like u understand girls very well
- my favorite of the poems I've read so far
nice job steve

[Steven Cash]

thanks so much

yea, i guess i do understand girls

i mean, i've seen a lot

[Erica Ross]

You're awesome ! lol

[Steven Cash]

Thank you so much

[Elizabeth Marie O'neil-..]

My god, this made me smile like a fool! That could've been a song and I guarantee I would have it on replay. :) Simply beautiful.

[Steven Cash]

Thanks

[meg333]

What a beautiful message--something everyone should read!

[Steven Cash]

Thanks Meg

[kittykatt]

wow! this is lovely.

[Steven Cash]

Thank you

[kittykatt]

uw

[Kathrine]

gave me shivers in a beginning. cant be critical as dont know much about poetry, but can say it is a nice one.

[Steven Cash]

Thanks

[The Refined Poet]

nicely written. definitely has a lyrical feel to it.

[Steven Cash]

Glad you enjoyed

[Jolie Blossom]

This sounds extremely familiar but I love it :)

[Steven Cash]

Yea I got inspiration from Cinderella by Steven Curtis Chapman

[Brielle Cartny]

Have you ever heard Cinderella by Steven Curtis Chapman? If you haven't you should take a listen. They are so close!

[Steven Cash]

Yes I know it

It was an inspiration for this kinda

[Brielle Cartny]

sweet!

[Ahmad Cox]

Very sweet

[Steven Cash]

Thanks Ahmad!