Shine

Yes, I doesn't really rhyme

Pretty girl with the pretty smile
Such a personality
Such a joy to be around
Never be afraid to shine

Never let em tell you that you aren't good enough
You are perfect
Just as you are
Never be afraid to shine

Who cares if you aren't skinny like the rest?
Sexy is skin deep
Beauty is from inside
Never be afraid to shine

Life may be hard and guys may be rough
Don't let them define you
Never give up
Never be afraid to shine

Author's Note

It doesn't really rhyme, but it's good.

Reviews

[Westminster Abbey]

Poems don't have to rhyme. I love the repetitiveness (is that how its spelled?) of the poem. Nice job.

[Steven Cash]

Thanks

[Rhianne Ney]

Aw... I love you already... Just kidding...
I don't write with rhymes and struggling to write one desperately...
Anyway this is a good write... every woman who read this will be inspired..
Women are emotional than men so I'm glad that we are special in your eyes...
keep writing, Steve(:

[Steven Cash]

I will thanks

[Rhianne Ney]

YOu're welcome

[.]

Great rhythm! And so true! 100/100

[Steven Cash]

Thanks

[.]

You're welcome!

[Geraldine]

Really sweet and such good thoughts. ^^ Beautiful, thumbs up for you. ^^

[Steven Cash]

Thanks

[Violet Dreams...]

Hmm its nice. What a work

[Steven Cash]

Thank you much!

[Soul Fire]

I really like this! excellent work!

[Amanda]

This reminds me of something, but I cant remember what. great job, nice poem

[Steven Cash]

lol ahaa thanks Amanda

[Gabby]

correction on the note, it's really good

[Steven Cash]

Thanks so much Gabby!