The Administrator—Urban Legend

First Story

This is one Urban Legend that I didn't author, but I felt I had to share with you all. The author is unknown, as the story has been around for a while and has 'changed hands' a lot. Yet and still, I had to share this with you.
I DO NOT CLAIM OWNERSHIP!!!

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In Columbia, S.C. there is an abandoned insane asylum on the corner of Bull and Elmwood. Should you enter it and travel up through it’s winding stairs to the second floor you will find a large treatment area.

There is a table opposite to the entrance of this room which is piled high with hundreds of razor blades. Many people have reported a strange urge to take one of these rusted blades and cut a small X into the center of their forehead in a location corresponding with the pineal gland.

Few ever give into this urge, but those who push aside their fears of tetanus or other infection have reported a sudden blinding headache and a whiting out of vision. When they regained some sense sight they all claimed to have witnessed black humanoid silhouettes upon further investigation of the asylum. These shadow people never have been known to interact with these people, generally just emitting an atheric muttering from unformed lips as if whispering to themselves. Others seem content in simply huddling their dark masses in the corners of the hallways and cells.

Select people, however, have reported encountering a shadow entity they universally called “the administrator.” This being was said to be sitting inside the administrative officer, made of dark shifting energies akin to the other shadow inhabitants, but with a few consistent discernible features. These included a dark hood obscuring much of it’s “face” and glowing eyes that seemed to reflect the light of the room. Strangest of all, “the administrator” is always said to posses what appears to be akin to a canine muzzle with rows of sharp teeth.

All who have encountered him have fled instantly, fearing the sharp unmistakable malignancy and intelligence housed within his dark eyes. A few people have even reported a later sensation of always being watched, occasionally catching out of the corner of their eyes glimpses of a large black dog.

Reviews

[camryn hernanez]

i really liked it. it was creepy

[Steven Cash]

Yes it is

This particular one is Creepy Pasta I think

[Butters]

No lie while I was reading this someone started hammering something outside...Give me a minute to change my pants so I can write a better review!

[Steven Cash]

lol ahaa thnx

[No More Angels]

I love the way it was written... the end gave me shivers o.o

[Steven Cash]

lol yea

[Poison Ivy]

original in the way you wrote it. most people would have taken this story and done a first or third person view, but you have written it more as a warning for others that choose to walk down the same road. almost as if you left a note in the hallway of the asylum, so that it may blow under their feet and give them a hint.
this is a great writing. will be reading the rest. ;)

[Steven Cash]

great, thanks

btw, the ones that say 'Original' in the title are the ones I wrote on my own

this just says 'Urban Legend' which means I had help/found it

[Poison Ivy]

oh okay. cool

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

I enjoyed this..... Freaky legend........ Yeah..... XD
100/100

[Steven Cash]

Thank you much

[Broken Soul]

This has so much swagger man.. I couldnt believe it!

Just joking haha. Nice.

[Steven Cash]

lol swagger? never heard that one

glad u liked it

[Broken Soul]

I have no idea what swagger means O.o I'm guessing cool, but im not sure. I hear people use it at school, so i commented in the way someone at my school would, absolutely horrible ;[}

[Steven Cash]

Swagger is a way you carry yourself. Like, I'm the baddest guy in this town, and i don't care if you think so or not, I'm bad! (bad in a good way)

Obama has swag. Sports players have swag. I have swag.

[Marie]

Not so bad. I'll read a few of the other stories.
Watch out for "Its".The possessive does not use an apostrophe.

[Steven Cash]

Ok Marie. Thank you so much

[Marie]

I just glanced at your next story. It looks interesting, but I haven't time tonight to do it justice. I'll look at it more closely tomorrow.

[Steven Cash]

Thank you Marie, I appreciate it. I will await your review tomorrow.

[LuciaMarie]

I really like this, but it leaves me wanting something more to go with it. But anywhere good job!

[Steven Cash]

Thanks Lucia!

[LuciaMarie]

You're welcome

[Henz]

lol.. haha.. Ooops im new.. thank you so much for that info steve.. i like this by the way. im really not a fan of scary stories since i get paranoid quite a lot.. Just imagine me peeping while reading?!! lol

[Steven Cash]

lol its ok. no problem

[Lonnie Paul Johnson]

I like this chapter, it remind me of an old story teller famous for telling fantastic, strange but true stories in a suspenseful way, Ripley s believe or not.

[Steven Cash]

What a wonderful comparison. Thanks!

[Henz]

it sure was..

[Steven Cash]

:)

[Steven Cash]

BTW, Henz, you can get more points if you put your comment in a new comment box. The more points, the highger you will be rated