Scary Stories and Urban Legends.
All stories are my own except: The Administrator, Man in the Black Cape, Obverse and Absolve, Candle Cove and Girl in the Photo.
All others are original, by me.
OK. I've read from start to finish and the stories themselves are good. However, if presented as 'True Urban Legends' there needs to be some form of link and or/analysis to justify the presence of the stories within a book. They require structure and a link. That means a Hell of a lot of research I'm afraid my friend. God's I wish you lived around the corner and I'd lend you arm fuls of what I mean. As it stands at the minute they are a good passing read. Throughly enjoyable and scary. But you can find the same on so many web sites. You have the writing skills to seriously kick arse here mate.
But on a good pair of brougues and get kicking. If you need a hand, shout. I've got a little time left in me.
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
Lol there is only one I said is absolutely true, and that's mine. Man in the house. Cause it happene.. read moreLol there is only one I said is absolutely true, and that's mine. Man in the house. Cause it happened to me
All the others are just legends. Maybe true. Maybe not
OK. I've read from start to finish and the stories themselves are good. However, if presented as 'True Urban Legends' there needs to be some form of link and or/analysis to justify the presence of the stories within a book. They require structure and a link. That means a Hell of a lot of research I'm afraid my friend. God's I wish you lived around the corner and I'd lend you arm fuls of what I mean. As it stands at the minute they are a good passing read. Throughly enjoyable and scary. But you can find the same on so many web sites. You have the writing skills to seriously kick arse here mate.
But on a good pair of brougues and get kicking. If you need a hand, shout. I've got a little time left in me.
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
Lol there is only one I said is absolutely true, and that's mine. Man in the house. Cause it happene.. read moreLol there is only one I said is absolutely true, and that's mine. Man in the house. Cause it happened to me
All the others are just legends. Maybe true. Maybe not
All of these were great, you sure have talent and I've thought a lot about that last one, and I'm very sad that we weren't able to find out what the world would be with those precious souls. Thanks for writing.
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/changetheworld/1061316/
That's my poem. Goodbye everyone.
Don't cry because it's over... smile because it happened... more..