I Am the Night
A Book by Steven Cash
 MOX NOX—I Am the Night  © 2012 Steven Cash
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Wow! Its so suspenseful! I love how you ended it with a question, great job Steven :D
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
Yeah, it's a work I am proud of. I'm thinking of doing another chapter or two
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12 Years Ago
oh why don't you make it into a small chapter book!
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12 Years Ago
Y'know what, I just might do that. And message you when it's up
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12 Years Ago
okay, thanks :)
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made my heart race as i read it! good job
Posted 12 Years Ago
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Interesting use of second-person, which is a really difficult one to use. The reader has to feel a kinship with the second-person character to 'possess' the character as they read it.
"it fills you with a strange feeling of ecstasy" is an excellent line which rewards careful readers who have got that far.
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
Thank YOU for getting that far
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wow! Tense - graphic and a unique perspective. Well penned
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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12 Years Ago
thank you thank you
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i like the short sentences--how you deftly throw them out like bullets, building suspense. like how it reads like a story/poem combo for me--enjoy all the line breaks.
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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12 Years Ago
Thank you so much, un-named person lady. :) lol
Seriously, I appreciate it. Thank you s.. read moreThank you so much, un-named person lady. :) lol
Seriously, I appreciate it. Thank you so much
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Wow... O.k. You just put my imagination on over drive. That's really good! I like how you put everything in second person.
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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12 Years Ago
Thank you Amber. BTW send me a friend request
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wow! dramatic and disturbing ... congratulations its excelent! It's a good prologue.
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
Thank you Hannah
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I love the way you end the story.
Cool but quite brutal.
Posted 12 Years Ago
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Added on August 18, 2012
Last Updated on August 23, 2012
Tags: Second, Person, Murder
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Steven CashA Secret Location, IL
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That's my poem. Goodbye everyone.
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