erika's painting

i get obsessed over a painting

If you walk down the hall

you view a panting on the wall

I gaze upon it day and night

It makes me feel just right

 

I wonder,

who could create such a thing?

A something that makes my heart sing?

My eyes wander to a space that's bare

The painter's name is written there

Erika

 

Erika who?

Erika what?

oh, my mind is stuck in such a rut!

i'm so sad I want cry!

Why didn't you put your last name Erika why ?!?!?!

Erika

 

I really want to congratulate this girl

the thought of not doing so makes me hurl!

Erika?

 

who made my heart start singing?

and the singing making my ears start ringing?

the slippery wall of hope I am clinging!

for, I all I know about you

Is something that makes me go boo-hoo

Is your first name: Erika!

 

This is

Erika's Painting

 

 

Author's Note

what are your thoughts? any improvements I should make?