Flip-flop Flip-flop

Endless chatters, silent groans

Hand in hand

Sweat-stained clothes

Free fall of sand

Flip-flop flip-flop

 

Endless walks, free flowing hair

Street side food

An unwavering stare

Swings of a mood

Flip-flop flip-flop

 

Unfulfilled dreams, distant lands

Vermillion’d forehead

Post-rock bands

Alcohol and weed

Flip-flop flip-flop

 

Screaming silence, half-read book

Intoxicating trance

A long hard look

Murder of plans

Flip-flop Flip-flop

 

Bare-foot on sand, silent tears

Comfortable pillows

Defeated fears

Darkened billows

Flip-flop flip-flop

 

Dimmed out lights, thundering rain

Forgotten memories

Boisterous lane

Unending stories

Flip-flop flip-flop

Reviews

[Simone Davis]

I enjoyed your writing and your use of description

[Sami Khalil]

"Bare-foot on sand, silent tears

Comfortable pillows

Defeated fears

Darkened billows

Flip-flop flip-flop"

[Dee]

Like this story/poem a lot Chandradhish, it is clever, and laid out well which makes for great reading..
I think 'flip flop flip flop' will dance in my head for a while, lol..love it...Bravo my friend...Dee

[Chandradhish Ghosh]

Thank you so much Dee...I am sure you will like the other poems too! When you have the time and mood please browse through the other stuff! Cheers!

[Frieda P]

Each stanza just got better, you tell a story within your poetry, love my flip flops and the beach, this brought back some old zesty memories. Love 'Vermillion’d forehead' and that entire verse.

[Chandradhish Ghosh]

Thank you so much Freida...you know vermillion'd forehead is a reference to a traditional bengalee custom...you might like to look it up on the internet! :)

[Frieda P]

No I didn't, thought you were referring to sunburn...will do that. Thanks for the info. :)

[Lauriegirl]

this is amazing and so cleverly written

[Chandradhish Ghosh]

Thank you Laurie...I welcome you to read the other works!

[Brittany Zedalis]

╰☆╮I really like the repetition you used here. Great job! ^-^╰☆╮

[Chandradhish Ghosh]

Thank you so much Brittany...you look very pretty in the picture! :)

[cycy]

"Dimmed out lights, thundering rain
Forgotten memories
Boisterous lane
Unending stories
Flip-flop flip-flop"
well written hey, i loved this one a lot, it really gets you into the poem and i loved the way you repeated the last line too :)

[Pryde Foltz]

Dimmed out lights, thundering rain
Forgotten memories
Boisterous lane
Unending stories
Flip-flop flip-flop

Great marriage between form and sentiment.

[Chandradhish Ghosh]

Thank you Pryde!

[Sami Khalil]

I like the poem a lot and the way you laid out the form too. As if you have a heading and then some definitions...Excellent...:)..

[Chandradhish Ghosh]

Thank you so much Sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..............