Drops of water

A million drops of water will fall,
And wash your sorrows for once and all.
Your darkest clouds will float aside,
The sun will shine on you, bright and wide.
Fight all your hurdles with might and grit,
Your day will come close bit by bit.
The poet will die but his words will live;
Enjoy the ride! It is long, yet brief!

Author's Note

This is not a typical poem just an expression of positive attitude...or I should rather say a compulsive display of fading optimism

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

I like the way you portray optimism as drops of water for it comes in drips too...Bravo

[Chandradhish Ghosh]

Thank you Sami...I really appreciate this :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)............

[Stephanie]

This is something I like to call the "Mike Wazowski Attitude". (Monsters Inc reference, I'm sorry!) Anyways, I think this is a great reminder. Life throws stuff at you, and we need to realize it's going to keep happening and take it with a grain of salt and move on, or better yet, "Enjoy the ride!"

[Chandradhish Ghosh]

thank you stephanie...I would be glad if you read more of my poems... :)

[Sheila Kline]

Yes, yes, yes!! Always keep that positive attitude!! It will help you reach your goals while enjoying life!!

[Chandradhish Ghosh]

Thank you Sheila...please scan through the other works..

[Pryde Foltz]

Very nice, Chandradhish. I like your take on life.

[Chandradhish Ghosh]

Thank you Pryde...I wish to carry on like this!

[Trang Vu]

I like the second to last line! Brilliant.

[Chandradhish Ghosh]

Thank you Trang!

[Augustus]

It is succinct. And it has a lovely optimistic tone. The lines I liked most were the first and the last one. In particular, "It is long, yet brief" conveys a lot. Time is indeed relative. If the going is tough, it seems like an enormous drag. And yet, when the end is near, you'll feel it has come too soon. Nicely done!

[Chandradhish Ghosh]

Thank you Shreyas...it is always nice to see your reviews it gives me an angle to think...

[Augustus]

My pleasure