you and I

Oh I heard you when you had nothing to say...
I saw when you when you were miles away!
I felt your presence every night and day
It was "I" only "I" but "you" were led astray!

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"Oh I heard you when you had nothing to say...
I saw when you when you were miles away!
I felt your presence every night and day
It was "I" only "I" but "you" were led astray!"
Bravo

[Sami Khalil]

Either you are talking about the self or your beloved. Either way it is good...:).........

[Chandradhish Ghosh]

Both Sami...both...we know how dejection works...right?

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:).............

[Pryde Foltz]

Unfortunately, some will just not let you love them. Nice write, Chandra.

[Nivedita...]

hi chandradhish I am new on this writers blog
Its awasem what you write,I like it

[Chandradhish Ghosh]

I am really glad that you do nivedita...I invite you to go through my other poems. :) Add me if you please!

[Nivedita...]

thanks for encouraging me.thanks a lot.... ;)