pain walks through me

                                   from death I will walk forth to a paradise
                                  from life i will walk a seemingly endless hell
                                  I go forward for the light in the blackness
         through emptiness i wade 
     knowing one day i will be whole
                               blood shall stain my eyes from my own arrogance
                                          still i walk, hoping i will see yet again
               for i must see again
                                    
                                     

Reviews

[Emily B]

pain walks through me - i relate to words like these so very easily

[Brianna]

this is... a metaphor. correct? If I am reading a metaphor, then this is amazing. From a particular standpoint, I can see exactly what this poem or metaphor is implying. If you look at this poem from a person who has gone through a lot of pain's point of view, you can really grasp what this poem is truly about. This is precisely what I love about this poem. Not anyone who reads it will be able to understand what this poem is implying. Great write, great read. overall, fantastic job. well put.