One

One

A Poem by chael

My form is but an illusion, mere chance that I am here
Suppose we are identical, in every form of the word
Minds pleading for individuality, that, an illusion two
Hearts seeking unity, it's our natural instinct two
Suppose we press reverse, rewind across galaxies and universes two
Only to realize it all began at one

© 2015 chael


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chael
Don't look with your eyes, look with your heart.

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"Suppose we are identical, in every form of the word."

Inviting and comforting. Beautifully put.

Posted 9 Years Ago


"it's our natural instinct two(too)
Suppose we press reverse, rewind across galaxies and universes two(too)"

A good short poem...:)..................




Posted 9 Years Ago


Interesting thoughts, I've always wondered at the question or concept of the multiverse.
Certainly does seem more interesting to think this might exist although simple logic may dictate otherwise.
Logic however has been known to laugh in the face of science before. Inspiring piece.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is such a lovely poem and I found it to be really enjoyable to read, short but yet really deep, keep up the great work!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Nice poem. Short, deep and very direct. Keep it up

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is a beautiful poem, specially the last line left me awe.
Enjoyable to read, Excellent poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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