Seems

I've been high and I've been low

Down that city, down that road

Around the bend, smelling the dew

Rather be home, with coffee for two

Smell of you, your husky cologne

Just won't go, won't leave me alone

I could venture every city on the map

But that won't bring my sweet honey back

Somebody tell me how I got this far?

I've been searching, multiple trips to the bar,

Seems I've lost my wits, seems I've called it quits

Seems I can't get rid, the memory of you

All my glory, all my pride

Is too long gone, been swept to the side

I'm out in the open, no place to hide

My feelings are raw, I need room to decide

Where I turn to, where I go

Down that city, down that road

Give me a minute, few years or so

To let my tears of sweet honey go

Somebody tell me how I got this far?

I've been searching, multiple trips to the bar,

Seems I've lost my wits, seems I've called it quits

Seems I can't get rid, the memory of you

 

Author's Note

It's in its beginning stages, haha, I'm waiting for it to spread its wings and fly.

Reviews

[Roland Petrov]

Sounds like a song lyric to me, and quite a good one. "Rather be home with coffee for two" is probably my favorite line. Ah, I just see that you are indeed a lyric writer, but try not to call yourself average. This one, at least, is above that.

[chael]

Thank you so much for your kind words, I really appreciate them. :)