A New Phase

A New Phase

A Poem by Chadvonswan
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A new phase 
corrupts
the shell of
the sun
Lunar light 
ferments
our thoughts and
boils our
toxins
and sprouts 
the dream seeds 
left in our
pillows
But the sun is 
blind
How ironic
It can only see into 
the blinding void
of itself
but it can't see your
color
The fluorescence 
in your voice
tickled my 
eyes and
made them 
seek
your watercolors
spilled in your
hair
left there to 
bask in its 
shiny residue
Your skull
is the shell that
hides the sun
and when you
dream
the dawn blinks
on our morning
garden
�" The solar
magic trick �" 
I laugh and
recall 
all the 
dice 
rolled
and the marbles
collected
and the kisses
traded thru
time
in the memory of
our silent
eyes
The only
magic trick worth
applauding for 
is the trick 
of your voice
and how it sang
so bright it
caressed the clouds
and your eyes
that whispered
the secret 
story behind 
them
to 
me

© 2014 Chadvonswan


Author's Note

Chadvonswan
I can't seem to find a meaning
OR a
Method
to the madness

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my favorite phrase is "watercolors spilled in your hair" this is a perfect love note, you must be the king of them!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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"The fluorescence
in your voice
tickled my
eyes and
made them
seek
your watercolors
spilled in your
hair
left there to
bask in its
shiny residue"

:: a very trippy piece of writing... the above lines are especially psychedelic... in a refreshing way... (in my humble opinion)...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Chadvonswan

10 Years Ago

I'm very glad that you say its a very trippy piece of writing, hahah, my absolute intentions. Thanks.. read more
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10 Years Ago

:: you're very welcome... :)
If I had thought this was when I kissed my husband he would have pushed me out of the bed. The last t lines I think are very good. Valentine

Posted 10 Years Ago


Chadvonswan

10 Years Ago

Well thank you very much ValNTine

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