Synthetics

Synthetics

A Poem by Chadvonswan
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Artificially Loving Life

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My dead eyes see the truth
Even though all light is blind
The pale darkness can soothe
Searching for a sun to shine
Neurons in the cerebral tunnel swim
Through your spine and out your head
The light inside is gradually growing dim
I think we might be the sleeping dead
Plastic synthetics serve as a substitute
For the lips that which you kissed
And the melodies produced by your flute
Will be artificially, eternally missed
Your tongue is now a dead fish
Scales that no longer reflect or glow
The water in your mouth swish and swish
The swallowed teeth drown in your blood flow
We both wake simultaneously
And see each other artificially
Through robotic eyes that record
And a computerized soul we can't afford
Screws in our heads
Bolts in our rear
I'd rather be dead
If I cannot fear
But yet we are alive
And will mechanically thrive
As long as the battery in our heart
Is turned off and will never start

© 2014 Chadvonswan


Author's Note

Chadvonswan
I don't really know where I was going with this.

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I think you meant: As long (as) the battery in our heart, in the second to last line

I think that the reason you said you didn't know where you going with it is because sometimes in life 9and well this sounds like a dark love poem to me) we don't know where we are going with love and we seem to love people mechanically. Either for the purpose of having someone to do it with and by 'it' I mean both sex and love. Sometimes I feel like society PEOPLE feel like they need someone to have this ting called love. and we tend to fling ourselves at it because one person reciprocates. And in the end we will stay happy as long I we realize not one will ever love the other fully hence the off switch to our hearts.

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I think you meant: As long (as) the battery in our heart, in the second to last line

I think that the reason you said you didn't know where you going with it is because sometimes in life 9and well this sounds like a dark love poem to me) we don't know where we are going with love and we seem to love people mechanically. Either for the purpose of having someone to do it with and by 'it' I mean both sex and love. Sometimes I feel like society PEOPLE feel like they need someone to have this ting called love. and we tend to fling ourselves at it because one person reciprocates. And in the end we will stay happy as long I we realize not one will ever love the other fully hence the off switch to our hearts.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You sure did get somewhere though

Posted 10 Years Ago



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