Love and Ash

Love and Ash

Three days it has been

Three days of filth

Haven't showered in three days

The ash from my cigarettes covers my hands

The stench becomes stale

Sickening

Still you don't love me

I don't think you love anyone

But you

If you did

It would be me

Not the hollow low-lives

 

Pretending to be

Any more than the ash

I kick under my feet

Reviews

[pia]

interesting poem depicting the emotions of a person expressing the love he has for a girl who doesnt love him back.
I like the emotions and pain
nice expressions and nicely worded
suggestion; ' i dont think you love anyone but yourself'
not 'you'
this was an interesting and well worded poem !!