Inhale

Inhale

A Poem by Tenten

 

 

Taking in that spicy smoke

I inhale, then cough

As the harsh fumes leave me

Brushed away by the wind

The sky is blue in white clouds

Cooled from the unseen sun

By rain storm winds

Approaching

Shadows grow in strength and weaken

As white clouds pass above

And I think of you for a simple smile

 

© 2008 Tenten


Author's Note

Tenten
Cp. 4:29PM Wen 08/13/08 NM I smoked and thought of him, tired eyes, sleepy, alone, blah here blank almost (Typed, House)

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weaving nature into this makes smoking appear green.a moment.just wish it was alittle longer

Posted 14 Years Ago


I liked the way you used nature to portray your feelings in this one. i wish it had been a little longer.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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