The Rain

The Rain

A Poem by Tenten

 

It rains during the night

Purple clouds turned dark

As the sun sets behind

Blocked mountain sky lines

Little drops of liquid life

Beating against the trees

Drizzling on unfortunate scenes

Bathing the world in a summer kiss

It rains during the night

Keeping away nightmares with

Subtle mark dreams

Offering restless sleepers

A moment to breathe, escape reality

In purple clouded skies turned dark

 

© 2008 Tenten


Author's Note

Tenten
Cp. 7:52AM Sat 08/16/08 'Breathe' Anna Nalik fine, tired a bit, just a piece, thought, i like rainy nights (Typed, House)

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The pieces goes well...I feel the last line is not needed...seems to hang there...

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Tenten
Tenten

Alamosa, CO



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