Pathetic

Pathetic

A Poem by Tenten

 

 
She's doing it again
Speaking for him
Using his words
His thoughts
His beliefs
As her own
Because he's the man
He's the one in charge
 
But he doesn't pay the bills
Isn't allowed near a child
Under 18 for the rest of eternity
Can't see my brother
Can't see my younger cousin's
Isn't allowed in public restaurants
 
But she's using his words
Dismissing his actions
No...
Justifying his actions
His every move that
Excludes her children from her life
From her thought process
 
She's doing it again
Letting another man
Be the ruler, boss,...King
In her life
And doesn't even notice
 
Pathetic
 

© 2008 Tenten


Author's Note

Tenten
Cp. 6:53PM Wen 06/24/08 'Right Here' Staind Mother again, she's losing herself, getting tired of it, its pissing me off, i wanna speak (Typed, House)

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you explain the word pathetic well in the verse...the way you start this in the first stanza and then lay into it in the rest of the read...

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Tenten
Tenten

Alamosa, CO



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