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A Poem by Tenten

 

 
when he dreamed of demons i imagined the man next door
when he stood on park way benches preaching of gods and glory through his eyes
i thought of the moon, her glow in starlit nights, i thought of cricket songs and pen ink
when he vanished from sight i dictated life by clicks of keyboards and lighters
now moving past those wounded nostalgic eyes
i wonder on new faces hoping for the loves of past to stay present
beyond the stars i dream and hands that mean a kiss
exist in ticks and tocks more than nine and two beyond eleven and seven
to dirt roads and rail road tracks
dancing
 

© 2008 Tenten


Author's Note

Tenten
Cp. 1:43PM Fri 08..22..08 'Love Song' Tesla most an eye piece, fine here i guess, missing people, lone, for everyone i care for, fingertips, breathing but still sad worried twisted noted and missing lots of people ahh damn fucking hormones (Typed, Myspace Blog Brads Comp-House)

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I LIKED HOW YOU CONVEY THIS...THE COMPARISON IN THE BEGINNING LINES AS YOU TELL US THE STORY AND THEN TELL US FROM A DIFFERENT PERSPECTIVE AFTER THAT...

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Tenten
Tenten

Alamosa, CO



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