Forced Hand

 

 

All the words

Forced hand in pushing

Pen to paper

Blocked letters

The sorrow by loss of creation

These are tears

Tasted on parting lips

As the lines blur

 

Author's Note

Cp. 9:17AM Thu 08/29/08 NM sad, lost. Lulu missing, tearing, lonely (Written, Pria)

Reviews

[Poeticpiers]

Your message is very clear but You could improve your work by choosing better words ie pushing would read better as putting. You missed the s of blurs. A little time taken reediting before posting is never wasted Loss of creation I think you meant