So Long I Fell

 

 

so long it feel off anger aggravation take met people i thought your soul in bed lonely no sol eons money even then should and sun me time heat heart go en sand us hunt liar conviction (this sentence is what the piece was created from. i thought it important to keep in.)

 

 

so long i fell on anger and aggravation

to take me to a lonely place

i thought people and money where

eons from the sun and heart

the taste of sand in me

the conviction of a liar

go...follow into the bed

your soul i fell on

 

Author's Note

Cp. 7:37PM Mon 06/23/08 'Mouthful of Cavities' Blind Melon made from and juble and still from Soul One ok just flowing the last quota piece for me, tired thinking flowing down stream bad way (Typed, Prides)

Reviews

[Laura E. Aranda]

oooooohhh!
I like LIKE this line:
the conviction of a liar

hmmmm the rest was a tad out of my reach of comprehension! haha
Cheers to you and your creative spirit, lea