Puzzle

Puzzle

A Poem by Tenten
"

another piece isnpired by my brother

"

 

 
we start out with twenty pieces
            no! something smaller
lets go with ten
connecting and breaking
forcing and hammering
till the pieces form some odd shape
that we'll declare beauty
as we grow
            we'll get better
one hundred to mark the growth
but the mind overcomes the challenge
lets at four hundred more
and still the world is still
clicking and negotiating each step
every way the shapes connect
so at a thousand the mind is tested
starting slowly finding pace
 
at seven years of age, these pieces
off puzzles are getting easier
 

© 2008 Tenten


Author's Note

Tenten
Cp. 5:32PM Fri 06208 NM ok, writing about my brother, doing good, this is ok, not a true flow piece, forced for a sudden 15 quota, may be more later (Typed, Brads Comp-House)

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Tenten

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